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[cheapskate101]

aww i wont laugh im not mean ok upload the pic dealsniffer

[Lynnie]

Oh, new paragraph starts right after "I'd love to share about." It didn't indent when I copy and pasted, and yes, Mr.Miguel is my eng teach.

[Sanrio]

How long will hit 1500 posts? Now is just #78.

[madeinczech]

I've chosed - I've chosen this friend...

different from all of my other friends.

[cheapskate101]

Ok heres what i think should be corrected

-do not use the word don't or wasn't etc.
- i would get rid of the part about your parents imo it dopesnt fit with the rest of it, add something else maybe a bit more about your friend without going into detail

hope i make sense havent written an esasy in a little while

[Lynnie]

Thank you :D Oh and my eng teacher told us something about not using shortened words in certain paragraphs. Would it be incorrect to use words like don't instead of do not in my paragraph?

[cheapskate101]

what tense are you allowed to write in?

[Meg1112]

Hi

[Lynnie]

Ok thanks!

[cheapskate101]

yes you must use the full word- do not instead of dont

[Lynnie]

He never talked about tenses, so I'm just going to write it all in past

[Meg1112]

1500 post is a while away!

[cheapskate101]

yeah it is LOL go get more people!

[dealsniffer]

Cheaps made some good points and I would never laugh. I think it is neat that you are sharing it on here.

[Lynnie]

Does this sound good to replace about my parents' sentence? - "Should I write about my parents, one of my bestfriends, one of my favourite teachers...I didn't know!"