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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:14 PM #76
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aww i wont laugh im not mean ok upload the pic dealsniffer
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:15 PM #77
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Oh, new paragraph starts right after "I'd love to share about." It didn't indent when I copy and pasted, and yes, Mr.Miguel is my eng teach.
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:16 PM #78
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How long will hit 1500 posts? Now is just #78.
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:17 PM #79
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I've chosed - I've chosen this friend...
different from all of my other friends.
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:18 PM #80
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Ok heres what i think should be corrected
-do not use the word don't or wasn't etc.
- i would get rid of the part about your parents imo it dopesnt fit with the rest of it, add something else maybe a bit more about your friend without going into detail
hope i make sense havent written an esasy in a little while
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:18 PM #81
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Thank you :D Oh and my eng teacher told us something about not using shortened words in certain paragraphs. Would it be incorrect to use words like don't instead of do not in my paragraph?
I Love you; not for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you.
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:18 PM #82
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what tense are you allowed to write in?
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:19 PM #83
Hi
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:19 PM #84
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Ok thanks!
I Love you; not for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you.
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:19 PM #85
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yes you must use the full word- do not instead of dont
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:19 PM #86
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He never talked about tenses, so I'm just going to write it all in past
I Love you; not for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you.
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:20 PM #87
1500 post is a while away!
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:21 PM #88
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yeah it is LOL go get more people!
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:23 PM #89
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Cheaps made some good points and I would never laugh. I think it is neat that you are sharing it on here.
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Sun, Oct 11th, 2009, 07:23 PM #90
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Does this sound good to replace about my parents' sentence? - "Should I write about my parents, one of my bestfriends, one of my favourite teachers...I didn't know!"
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