I just needed to write something. I will work on it some more tommorow.

well it's certainly got a creepy air about it! but i did like it...made me think. (haven't done much of that other than math lately lol)
so where did the writing excercise come from? a self demand?

Marcus collinsworth was my attempt to make a name similiar to mark calloway. A professional wrestler under the name of the undertaker. His gimmick is that he is an undead western outlaw.

I had that in mind plus the movie and comic the crow and another supernatural western I saw recently.

Im fine, (bit depressed wont lie)

but it was a writing excercise. the idea was that marcus is the main character but doesnt remember his previous life. The dead are the people he has killed.

hmmm, that's interesting writing. very good actually. but what does it mean in the end? that Marcus (or the character who is supposed to be dead already) isn't really dead? or is trying to commit suicide?
are you ok?

Can you look at the thread I posted today ( not the one about red ants) and leave a comment to let me know what you think of what I posted. Its called "where should I go with this?"

you may...not sure if i can help tho!

May I ask a favour?