I added more to the story.

Hello!!!

Can you take a look at the thread I posted, entitled "where should I go with this?" and leave a comment to let me know what you think of the writing?

Hi gryphon, what can I do for you?

Can you do me a favour?

Hello there!

Thank you.

Best wishes for you and yours this holiday season gryphon!

Mazel Tov

I hadnt heard of the contest but I will look into it.

Hi gryphon
Hope your great aunt is all ok now
Don't know if you contest, but I thought of you when I came across this one:
http://whatsyourish.com/contest.php
Hope you're having a good weekend

Oh gryphon, so sorry to hear about your great aunt. How old is she? Power of prayer, positive thinking, etc., I do believe in it and am sending some her way.

Oh okay

thanks

Ohhhh don't say sorry lol! I'm not a writer but I do know it's not an easy process!
Have a good week

none for a while ahead

sorry

I did notice, not much of a poem reader though.... sorry. I am keeping an eye out for your short stories though

not too bad

did you see the new poem i posted?

hey gryphon, how are ya?

hello

Happy Canada Day gryphon!

do you have any comments about the story?

a good week to you as well

Sounds good! looking forward to reading it
Have a great week gryphon

actually i just started on a new version of a short story last night.

ill post the original in the tea room but i dont really like it. the dialouge is too stileted and it has cliches

the new version is completley different while retaining some elements
its gonna be awesome

Hi gryphon
working on any writing lately?

you are most welcome

how are you doing?

Hi there
Thanks for the rep

ill give it a look

thanks