Experimental Poem

[gryphon]

This is a poem i wrote to experiment with a different style of writing. Let me know what you think of it

[Judstir]

Hmmmmm...I'm not sure. Different that's for sure, but it's good to experiment I guess. We'll wait and see what other's think.

[daisybear]

I like it, but I'm not creative so I'm not sure how much my opinion counts.

[gryphon]

Hmmmmm...I'm not sure. Different that's for sure, but it's good to experiment I guess. We'll wait and see what other's think.

indeed. i just wanted to experiment with the rhyming scheme

[sandiecoop1]

Very Good!! You can never be sure unless you exeriment!!!Keep it up. I see talent.

[mcminsen]

I enjoy reading it through and imagining that it's being recited by someone with an iconic voice, like Sir John Gielgud or Wintley Phipps. Check out Wintley Phipps' voice in this video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HfGyt...eature=related

Keep up the writing! And keep posting some of it here!

[gryphon]

Very Good!! You can never be sure unless you exeriment!!!Keep it up. I see talent.

thank you. that made my day a little better

[Littlemoe0]

I like this one gryphon, good job.