Poetry Help Needed

[gryphon]

I need some help with my poetry.

Can anyone here (or hopefully more than one person) make a list of what they think are 5 of my best poems. However, they need to be some of my dark or weird poems. ( this is for a magazine Im submitting to.)

[win-star]

I like 2 of yours ....

http://forum.smartcanucks.ca/2450972-post2.html

http://forum.smartcanucks.ca/2502336-post4.html

[gryphon]

I like those as well, but they would not be what the mag is looking for. they need to be dark or quirky/weird. Its a new mag ( an online one that is jsut starting out) that I was asked to submit stuff to.

[gryphon]

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[gryphon]

Ive narrowed it down to these. Which 5 should I choose?

[gameprogirl]

lion of the sky

[gryphon]

Which 4 others besides lion?

[Andit]

My choices:

Eternity
Lion Of The Sky
Oh sweet darkness
Emptiness
The pain sings out

[gryphon]

thank you.

[BookMom]

My choices would be:

Lion of the Sky
Where must one go
i look to the sky
The pain sings out
Emptiness

[gryphon]

Thanks for your help everyone. But as it turns out, I cannot submit any of these and will have to use ones I have not shared before, due to certain reasons I don't want to go into.